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[quote name='nazhira wrote:


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Zhivvy']Like it, is that one of yours?

Yep, it's mine.  Thought it up in just 5 minutes.  I just need a thought... and I'm off. ;-)

 

I'm in a poetic and descriptive mood tonight.

 

Give me a thought and I'll create something for you...

 

"The old fire"

Flames danced brightly in the hearth

Across the coals and up the chute

They came together and hopped apart

To the song of the wind on its timeless flute.

 

The fire cracked and burned and bled

A continuous rite in its old filled life

It merrily shone 'til it was time for bed

And fell asleep beside his aged wife.

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Hi naz, welcome back and I'm glad to hear you are feeling better. The Old Fire is for you. You can keep it. If you need me to sign it for you, I can! lol

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[quote name='bandcompletely wrote:


nazhira wrote:

bandcompletely wrote:

Zhivvy']Like it, is that one of yours?

Yep, it's mine.  Thought it up in just 5 minutes.  I just need a thought... and I'm off. ;-)

 

I'm in a poetic and descriptive mood tonight.

 

Give me a thought and I'll create something for you...

 

"The old fire"

Flames danced brightly in the hearth

Across the coals and up the chute

They came together and hopped apart

To the song of the wind on its timeless flute.

 

The fire cracked and burned and bled

A continuous rite in its old filled life

It merrily shone 'til it was time for bed

And fell asleep beside his aged wife.

 

Been teaching poetic technics this week to year 7s - this has a lot of them. You would be reaching your target levels with this tongue.gif

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nazhira wrote:

bandcompletely wrote:

Zhivvy']Like it, is that one of yours?

Yep, it's mine.  Thought it up in just 5 minutes.  I just need a thought... and I'm off. ;-)

 

I'm in a poetic and descriptive mood tonight.

 

Give me a thought and I'll create something for you...

 

"The old fire"

Flames danced brightly in the hearth

Across the coals and up the chute

They came together and hopped apart

To the song of the wind on its timeless flute.

 

The fire cracked and burned and bled

A continuous rite in its old filled life

It merrily shone 'til it was time for bed

And fell asleep beside his aged wife.

Absolutly beautiful BC ! You are geniuos .

I'll keep it for ever

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Well i'm going to leave you poets to it, i have to go and sleep - up quite early tomorrow and i'm tired tonight.

So night night - love to all xxx

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Claire T wrote:

Zhivvy wrote:

Claire T wrote:

Zhivvy wrote:

Claire T']ewww bono bum biting that's just gross

 

hehaha

Let me give it a bite and will let you know!
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pfff no comment  and you know who i think has the best butt in u2 anyway
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The one with the purple bass by any chance?

you mean the purple sparkly one that HE HAS TO use in Vienna!

 

I'm sure he'll be polishingit right now just for you in August! tongue.gif

 

stop it I gigle enough talking about his sparkly purple bass!

 

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[quote name='Zhivvy wrote:


bandcompletely wrote:

nazhira wrote:

bandcompletely wrote:

Zhivvy']Like it, is that one of yours?

Yep, it's mine.  Thought it up in just 5 minutes.  I just need a thought... and I'm off. ;-)

 

I'm in a poetic and descriptive mood tonight.

 

Give me a thought and I'll create something for you...

 

"The old fire"

Flames danced brightly in the hearth

Across the coals and up the chute

They came together and hopped apart

To the song of the wind on its timeless flute.

 

The fire cracked and burned and bled

A continuous rite in its old filled life

It merrily shone 'til it was time for bed

And fell asleep beside his aged wife.

 

Been teaching poetic technics this week to year 7s - this has a lot of them. You would be reaching your target levels with this tongue.gifI'm not up on all the techniques but if I'm reaching my target levels, then I'm a good student! lol

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[quote name='nazhira wrote:


bandcompletely wrote:

nazhira wrote:

bandcompletely wrote:

Zhivvy']Like it, is that one of yours?

Yep, it's mine.  Thought it up in just 5 minutes.  I just need a thought... and I'm off. ;-)

 

I'm in a poetic and descriptive mood tonight.

 

Give me a thought and I'll create something for you...

 

"The old fire"

Flames danced brightly in the hearth

Across the coals and up the chute

They came together and hopped apart

To the song of the wind on its timeless flute.

 

The fire cracked and burned and bled

A continuous rite in its old filled life

It merrily shone 'til it was time for bed

And fell asleep beside his aged wife.

Absolutly beautiful BC ! You are geniuos .

I'll keep it for ever

 

I'll send it to you in a form you can print out. ;-)

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Well i'm going to leave you poets to it, i have to go and sleep - up quite early tomorrow and i'm tired tonight.

So night night - love to all xxx

sleep well zhivvy!

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that poeme is very nice BC, although english not my language, it would make it even better.

i'm off to sleep, enjoy a poetic night under the new moon.... and see you all tomorrow!

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that poeme is very nice BC, although english not my language, it would make it even better.

i'm off to sleep, enjoy a poetic night under the new moon.... and see you all tomorrow!

Thanks babs, sleep well!

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Hi CT, I'm here now. I was waiting my daughter go to sleep, finally !!!

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Ok, no wine, no cigarettes.... Quit boring.... Then, what will we do ?

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Dunno. I'm not drinking or smoking either. Did a bit last night over at my brothers. Not in the mood for much tonight. It's quite a boring night! ;-)

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It is ! Sorry, I was reading the thread about the movies nad reading about Romania and Dracul information, most I've already knew but thre is always something new.

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Well it seems my keyboard keys are gone for a drink, unfortunatly without me !

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dunno, where that thread is. I dunno what sort of mood I'm in tonight. whether to chat, say nothing, read stuff or eat.
The thread is What's your....or something,.... I don't know. I'm too cool right night, maybe too boring.

 

dunno, where that thread is. I dunno what sort of mood I'm in tonight. whether to chat, say nothing, read stuff or eat.

 

But you wrote that beautiful poem tonight !!!! Special tonight, and I received it, so special tonight, don't you think ?

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Yeah, i was in a writing mood earlier. Now, I'm just in a chill out mood I guess. I think my brain is worn out!

 

I'm like you I think, I will say goodbye tonight ! I have a few things to do and then to sleep.

Bye sweetes, see you tomorrow, early or late. Kisses, kisses, kisses....

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