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YES !! !! That would be so cool !!!

 

YES !! !! That would be so cool !!!

 

A Plea.

 

On one hand I have a hold of your heart

 

on the other an unknown piece of art

 

The canvass promises so much, and I dive in with both hands

 

My work is such, that control is not mine,

 

I wait and wait for you to let me shine.

 

For i have created a tangled up mess, and my heart is under duress.

 

Give me honor to do unto you what you would have me do.

 

For I wander through the streets , passing by ghosts, they are cruel men.

 

And there wickedness knows no end.

 

 

Let me up from my struggle below, open your hearts and let the wind blow,

 

I mean you no harm, I am only a conduit for your disarm.

 

Too long have we fought, too loud are our thoughts,

 

What have we come to, a stalemate of sorts.

 

If you set me free, i promise to be a friend to thee, I hold no malice, it is not my way.

 

I would rather drink from a poison chalice, than throw it away.

 

 

So join me in love, let go of your hate, take a seat at my side

 

And let life be your fate. 

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It is what it is

 

You gave me a kiss, and  I blew it away.

 

No reason nor rhyme, I just cant say

 

I walked in your shoes, and you in mine

 

We took leaps of faith in that moment in time.

 

You stole my heart, and more besides,

 

I gave to you nothing but lies.

 

Except for the truth that I could not hide.

 

What man is this you cry at night, that only deals in darkness and won,t share the light.

 

 

Too long has this man been subject to ridicule, for he has been pinned down under iron fist rule.

 

His words are not his own, only the ones he says quietly to himself at night

 

These give him the courage to walk on and give him respite.

 

He takes these long lessons and stores them away,

 

He hugs life tightly, and waits for his day.

 

 

Meanwhile the rumours are rife, and the air can be cut with a knife

 

She leads the way, but he won,t throw a stone

 

The world watches on, and all bets are taken.

 

Two glittering souls kept apart and forsaken.

 

The earth bellows loudly, the sky shows its detest, the seas roll like thunder

 

and then the people protest.

 

 

So many times these woes of the heart fall upon us.

 

Only not so often do we take it upon us to gaze in and wonder

 

How could there be such a terrible blunder.

 

But these times are full of tests, and in order to get the best out of each other

 

man can and should call on his brother.

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You should definitely get published...I don't understand this lyric : Give me honor to do unto you what you would have me do.

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You should definitely get published...I don't understand this lyric : Give me honor to do unto you what you would have me do.

 

You should definitely get published...I don't understand this lyric : Give me honor to do unto you what you would have me do.

Should read Give me the honor to do unto you.

 

He has exhausted himself ,trying everything in the book to capture her love, she won,t relinquish it that easy, basically he is asking what do i have to do to prove my undying love for you, for you beat me black and blue, and squeeze my heart at your leisure, you give me so many hints, now point to your treasure.

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Discontent

 

You spoke, I listened

 

then I waited, and you went missing.

 

You promised so much, and were warm to the touch.

 

Then days went by and I disappeared, I could no longer

 

be a man of despair.

 

 

Haunted by you in my dreams, covering my screams so still in the night,

 

We walked hand in hand to the top of the parapet, you shivered and shook

 

I pulled you in close, as we took another look.

 

Then I opened my eyes, covered in sweat, the nightmares not finished with me yet.

 

 

The daylight floods in, with its warm welcoming glow, it wraps itself around me and won,t let go

 

For the night is gone for now, but will soon return, for it knows when love aches, and for whom it burns.

 

My solace is my will, for without this I would shrivel up and cease to exist.

 

My body slowly rejuvenates and I drag it along, my smile is returning and I burst into song.

 

She has taken so much, but i wont close down

 

Life is too short as i look at my reflection and frown.

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I could cry....I find myself in this in some way but still... my loneliness is so cold and deep though....

 

 

 

You're very good !!!!!

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